Tuesday, 8 January 2013

8th Pip

A sea-view, a bookshop in the living room
might be enough, as once they were
for this dying, crying man
if only his lover still lived

1 comment:

  1. Wow - there's a story here - quite different from the other pips. It's like a teaser to a short, bitter-sweet short story about a man, a sea view, a bookshop, a living room and his lover. Perfect.
    I am noticing the timing of the postings - and wanted to say - they are being done and that's the important thing... Plus I bet part of you is mulling them over all day... great percolation time!
    Big hugs. I am so enjoying these "pips". Kernels.

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